原標(biāo)題：北京環(huán)球教育分享10月雅思寫作高分范文

 

　　曾幾何時(shí)，環(huán)球顏王團(tuán)楊亮老師還夸贊過考官們，在這個(gè)寒秋悄至冷風(fēng)頻襲的時(shí)刻，考官們用了一個(gè)極其簡單的老題來迎接十一長假之后的首場(chǎng)考試。不曾想，好景不長。本周四的考試，很多烤鴨在寫作考場(chǎng)中的感受肯定是應(yīng)了時(shí)下最流行的一句話“藍(lán)瘦，香菇”。

 

　　我本將心向明月，結(jié)果你和我玩陰的。考試當(dāng)天下午，對(duì)于本次寫作考題的吐槽也是在悲涼的氛圍中歡快地刷屏了。

 

　　原題如下：

 

　　Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send message to contact them.Others think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.20161013

 

　　分析：

 

　　審題之后，請(qǐng)大家相信自己的眼睛，這的確是一個(gè)和太空技術(shù)相關(guān)的題目。題目討論的關(guān)鍵也的確是人類是否應(yīng)該和可能存在的外星人聯(lián)系。

 

　　筆者覺得十一假期期間，負(fù)責(zé)出題的考官肯定是看了很多科幻電影，如《ET》，《MIB》，《Mars Attacks》和《Independence Day》等。冷靜下來，本題其實(shí)難度有限，因?yàn)檫@些電影你也看過。試想一下，如果出題考官看了《釜山行》，烤鴨們就真的可以哭死在廁所了。

 

　　Scientists in some space research institutes have been sending message to some corners of the universe since they were able to do that.Possible consequences of doing so,seemingly,have not been carefully analyzed yet.

 

　　本段的開頭算是言簡意賅了。其實(shí)，眾所周知往外太空發(fā)信號(hào)， 不是一天兩天的事情了。咱們國家剛剛建成的那個(gè)“大鍋蓋”可不是為了看電視多收幾個(gè)頻道。因此一個(gè)簡單的背景介紹之后，就是明確地表達(dá)了筆者的觀點(diǎn)。對(duì)此，筆者表示并不樂觀。畢竟筆者是看了很多科幻片的。

 

　　Primarily,building connection with other intelligent species with humans'current technology does require incredibly high cost.This is to say,tremendous fund ought to be utilized for related technology research and establishment of some certain facilities instead of being used for solving some livelihood problems.Even though mankind were setting up connection with aliens who are living in a couple of light years away and are obviously less civilized with less advanced technology,with limited space technology that humans have currently we would be able do nothing further.Investing billions of dollars for saying hi to someone who might not understand at all is definitely not a wise decision.

 

　　坦言之，在寫這道題之前，筆者還真心的思考過這么問題。那是午夜夢(mèng)回，輾轉(zhuǎn)難眠的夜晚。筆者仰望星空，發(fā)現(xiàn)，其實(shí)也看不到啥，但是這并不影響筆者對(duì)于這個(gè)關(guān)乎全人類未來的命題的思考。以人類目前的有限的太空技術(shù)，和外星人建立聯(lián)系肯定是大費(fèi)周章的事情。如果被我們聯(lián)系到的外星人文明程度還不如我們，那將是一個(gè)極其尷尬并且非常不經(jīng)濟(jì)的局面。

 

　　耗費(fèi)大量人力物力只為了和外星人打個(gè)招呼，并且對(duì)方還不一定能懂，這明顯不是一個(gè)明智的決定。簡言之，這段針對(duì)題干當(dāng)中第一部分的人的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述。只論證，如果外星生物的智能程度不如我們的情況。為下文留下伏筆。

 

　　Worse,unknown creatures that receive humans'greeting are more advanced and intelligent ones than inhabitants of the earth.What will happen at that time is more likely to be what people often see in science fiction movies nowadays."White house is being attacked and Air Force One is shot down by missiles from unidentified flying objects".Intelligent species are not willing to co-exist peacefully or harmoniously with other creatures whose civilization apparently lags way behind.Their greed drives them use wars to make the earth their colony offering whatever they need from this planet.If that happened,humans would extinct and the only survivors would live their life in zoos of aliens.

 

　　承接上文，如果被我們聯(lián)系到的外星生物在文明程度和科技發(fā)展領(lǐng)域都完勝地球上這些愚蠢的人類。那么后果不堪設(shè)想，在這里請(qǐng)大家自覺腦補(bǔ)各種科幻片里面的破壞場(chǎng)面。請(qǐng)大家放心，首先被襲擊的永遠(yuǎn)是紐約，美國都快被消滅完了，外星人才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，原來地球上還有個(gè)亞洲。總之，這段直接回答了題干中另外一部分人的觀點(diǎn)，并且肯定了他們的想法。

 

　　As has been mentioned above,possible outcomes of sending message to unknown life in somewhere of the universe are what humans cannot afford or what we cannot accept.Therefore,space telescopes are not what we should spend money on,as paying for risks is never worthy.

 

　　結(jié)尾簡要地表達(dá)筆者觀點(diǎn)。與外星人建立聯(lián)系，不是徒勞無功就是引狼入室，愚蠢的人類對(duì)此切記要謹(jǐn)言慎行啊。

 

　　筆者在本文中論述觀點(diǎn)難免有不盡人意之處，歡迎大家斧正。